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5 responses to “Protected: Dissection or Poetry”

  1. Linda Jacobs

    Well, I say you get an A on this! The rhyme is barely noticeable and the pace keeps the reader involved. Very enjoyable!

    And it’s wonderful that you’ve been able to pursue two passions!

  2. wayne

    i liked this…second time readin even better….keep writing

  3. Gavin

    Either/or I love the resolution!

  4. one more believer

    oh i cannot help but to smile as we traveled through the dayz of poetry… ouch, i remember the pinned frog…the one i had was preggers.. thought it intriguing but could not get over the fact of the eggs… thou i soon started to think what if that was me…

  5. Tamra at Laughing Dove

    this is a great poem – so funny and perceptive – But then came a class on American Lit/with Freud as referee – and this – The world divided into two kinds of hell are two of my favorite lines.

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