6 Responses

  1. Carole
    Carole April 22, 2009 at 3:12 pm | | Reply

    Three of the poets you’ve chosen poets who are favourites of mine – Neruda, Olds and Rilke – the other two are new to me. I love the opening.

    You’ve done the job properly and worked them into a poem with a theme.

  2. BSQUARED86
    BSQUARED86 April 22, 2009 at 7:00 pm | | Reply

    The quotes fit well, as if they were your own words. Good work! Thanks for sharing your work and thank you for coming by my blog and commenting!

  3. Kimberly
    Kimberly April 22, 2009 at 8:03 pm | | Reply

    Good to see that someone else enjoys Rilke. And a nicely worked poem. Kudos.

  4. wayne
    wayne April 22, 2009 at 8:59 pm | | Reply

    nicely done…I love neruda..”ode to an onion” is a favorite

  5. sarah
    sarah April 22, 2009 at 9:57 pm | | Reply

    Good job!

  6. Tamra at Laughing Dove
    Tamra at Laughing Dove April 22, 2009 at 11:57 pm | | Reply

    another great poem. the flow and blending of lines works well.

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